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Now that it's said and done, bring 'em on!

http://www.papertank.com/article/Sylvan_Sin

Thanks!!

Here's my short story.

It's a little long, and it might disturb people. Be warned.

Sleep, those little slices of death; Oh how I loathe them.
-Edgar Allan Poe

My short story is also rather long, but I really would appreciate some criticism. I'd like to improve as much as possible.

I swear it's not totally based on the weaving of linen...

http://www.papertank.com/article/The_Last_Year_of_the_Linen_Maker

http://www.papertank.com/article/Just_a_Puddle
Most people say it's my best story.
and
http://www.papertank.com/article/Introductions
A humorous guide.

To be, or not to be....
You get the idea.
And read Just a Puddle, too. (See my profile content)
I'm happy. I'm crazy. I'm friendly. I'm Timmy. So be it.

The articles I've posted are excerpts from my thriller novel - Green Power. I am trying to see how popular and interesting my novel might be to prospective readers. The artivles are entitled; Prologue for the novel Green Power and Chapter One from Green Power. Any comments and votes would be appreciated.

Charles Vrooman
http://www.freewebs.com/vrooman

Greenpower's articles can be found here:

Prologue for Green Power
Chapter One from Green Power

Hey, I know it's really long, but it's currently my most promising story. Please read!

Perfect Insanity http://www.papertank.com/article/Perfect_Insanity

Read 'Perfect Insanity' Do it! Do it now!!!
*cough* I'm ok now... *cough cough*

http://www.papertank.com/article/Ways_of_the_twenty_fifth

I spent hours on that in total...
I'd like some reviews, ya dig?

,':)

A Twist of the Mind

I've never actually finished a short story and gotten any suggestions for them...I'd like some before I try to write another.

Wanna go to the moon?