Author's Commentary
this is a story that i wrote while i was in the hospitle and it is basd on true evnents. i hope you like it bcuase i worked realy hard on it and i hope you can look past the gramare becuse i had to get my brane checked so im not doing to well in the spelinng dparment. so i hope you like my stroy
august 3 1993
she smiled at me today. i was walking down the street and mommmy was helping me get around, and i saw her playing in the yard. sshe looked at me and she smiled with her teeth, all of theme. i smiled back, but my teeths aren’t much for looking at. im not much fore looking at. she has pretty brown eyes and great body which are still great even when i’m across from her on the sidewalk and mom is bugging me about yesterday’s jepordy. i wish shed stop already because wer crossing the street now and i turn to look one more time at her, and she gives me a nice wave back. i dont ever get waves from cute girls that much. or smiles,ether
augusr 4 1993
i didnt do much today.mom made me stay insie bcause she says i need to get my homework done today since it’s a sunday amd schooll is tomorrow. but this is silly ha because i don’t go to a normall school like othere kids.mom keeps me att home and i sit and pretend to b learning and listening to what shes saying. i ask mom what the girls name is and mom says that her name is sandy and i smile because thats a very cute name for a cute girl. mom laugh and tellls me that if i bhevav well tomoroow i can go and talk to her if i so chuse. but of course she nows thats what im going to do. so today i was real nice and polit and mom said that since i had been so good i could talk to her tomorow.and now im realy happy because of it
august 5 1993
so i was walking to sandys house today and these group of boys who always picked on me when i went out were coming bye me and they had always ben mean even when my mom was around and they would throw stuf at me like rocks and soda cans they crushed just to throw at me. But this time id brung a slingshot that my uncle gve me for christmas so i could defnd myself and when they got real closs i took a big peblle and whiped it at johny who always picked on me most.he got really mad and started to punch me hard and i fell down and curled up so he culdnt hit me bad but then the hole group started to gang up on me and kicking me and now i cant move one of my legs bcuse it hurts alot.but sandy came out and she yelled at the boys and they ran away quick.she asked if i was alrite and since i couldnt think of anything else i told her she had the most beutifle eyes and then all i rember after that was her face moving real close to me
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