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Cigarettes and Coffee

 
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felt good for two hours.
blue swirling
cig-a-rette smoke

black coffee
sty-ro-foam cup

gray cloudy
aut-umn-al breeze

mellow
mel-low
 
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  • sigh and lean back
    Posted Feb 18, 2010
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    ah-ah you are talented my friend. Perfect, perfect, what can I say? For a moment I was there with you and after this I think i shall brave the cold to watch the smoke blow from between my own lips. Inspired, and a little bit Beatnik, you've won my black heart.

    None that I can see. read more)
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