losing a friend

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Ever wonder? This is how,
Maybe yes, maybe no.
Always remember but good to forget.
Happy but mostly sad.
No one knows.
I’m losing you and everything I love.
A vivid picture in my head.
Already forgiven but never forgotten.
I try, I try.
Yet it is always hard,
Things will get better, I know.
But the fall down is scarier
than the hit of the ground.

• hm hm hm

  by imdeadgoaway

  Posted Oct 13, 2008
  +8
  Emotion is pretty visible here. I can connect in ways...
  I like the end a lot.
  The last two lines.
  Insightful, meaningful, really gives the piece a serious ending. Something that is very close to the heart for a lot of people, and it tied a lot of the piece together.
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• Date Added
• Oct 10, 2008 at 8:17 PM
• Article Type
• Literature
• Genres
• Poetry
• Topics
• People, Pain
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