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2 Reviews
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Well, then...
Posted Aug 15, 2008
The Pros
As tofishebe said, conveys our collective struggles of putting words on paper.
The Cons
In the first place, it didn't flow very well. The stanzas were uneven like my Uncle Tom's teeth, and most of it seems forced, in a way. Like you had a case of writer's block, and needed to get rid of it by writing a poem. About writer's block.
Final Thoughts
A good attempt, but a miss. I don't want to put you down, but you should try a different idea when writing a poem.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Not the most poetic
Posted Aug 14, 2008
The Pros
um it did convay the frustrations of writers block quite well
The Cons
this really was not very poetic, and i found it to be quite boring
Final Thoughts
try re-writing with a little less obviousness
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