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There are some things you should wish for
with your half-baked, heart ached toss of a coin,
These are your wishing well moments, your bubble dreams
these wishes, they are impossible things.
Yesterday, once today, is memory
and blue black bruises fade to brown
I wished for clean white kisses, yellow mornings
these wishes, they are impossible things.
You reach right handed, left bloody
and one time caress is a slap
I wanted soft touches, babies and white weddings
these wishes, they are impossible things.
Sometimes I am so much smaller then this
and curl in a corner and cry
and in the darkness, there pain sings
these wishes, they are impossible things.
Once upon a promise they spoke magic
and led me then to believe
beneath my shoulders were angels wings
and so I wish for impossible things.
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You made my face tingle
Posted Mar 29, 2009
Though it started off slow for me, this piece really impressed me. The pattern of contrasts and changes is really nice. Each stanza seemed very well written - I wouldn't change any of them. I really learned to love the last line, too.
The very last stanza was beautiful. That's the part tha... (
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