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Something that flitted through my head one night.

"I love you"
he said, at lost last
to her open casket.

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I don’t understand the core of the poem

by BunnymasterG

Posted Nov 15, 2008

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I appreciate what’s trying to be said in this poem. I interpret it as a lover from afar taking that final plunge of letting the infatuation be known only after his crush has died. Something to that effect anyway.

“at lost last”
It’s pretty damned hard to make sense of this. I’... (read more)

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Michael

Nov 15, 2008

Very, very short, but I like it. (Three more syllables and you could have had a haiku.)

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Nov 15, 2008 at 3:04 AM

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Literature

Genres

Poetry

Topics

Romance, Pain

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