loved the figurative language. The rain seemed to be a kind of catalyst, but i cant figure out how the sunshine would contrast that. And the leaves! really spiffy! nonetheless... I definitely related to it. the part about how he sees himself and the things he does as pointless, no motivation, cause no one will care. I empathize. and ignore the last dude... it wasn't too long, fo' sho' : )
Put you hate on paper
They won’t know it’s you
All people are the same
Gain major fame
Sign here in blood
And you’ll win the game
It’ll sell well
But a trip to hell
Hell, what’s it matter
Have a bestseller
In your wallet now
Choose wisely
Poverty or riches
Your own bitches
Stop being one
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