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The true faith

The true faith

Poem.

 
Did that god fool know
what his careless hands had wrought?
Clay is better left to clay
than applied to reason and thought.
The apple eaters, war makers
are still beiger shades of beige.
Bright souls belong in storybooks
that couldn’t cut the critics rage.
A heroes soul and heart and mind
is an unknown authors fiction.
Come, live real life under this iron sky.
Be purged of creativities affliction.
 
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  • Very cool read
    Posted Sep 16, 2008
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    I like the shortness and the rhythm. The rhymes are very good and don't seem forced at all.

    not too many i could see

    i enjoyed the poem and i can't wait to read more (read more)
Recent Comments
 
  • Sep 16, 2008
    Missed one thing! "heroes" should be "hero's"
Crowley
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    • Sep 15, 2008 at 6:08 PM
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