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The Bad Live

Thoughts on modern youth.

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I was thinking about how people interact, and wrote this as a chapter on how it probably turns out in the end. Understand, this was written with how the people of popular television, music, and movies act in mind. Enjoy.

Club beats
Strictly dictating a few
Descents;
Words of shallowness
Can make the most
Of a date

Empty chambers,
Laughing echoes around my world,
Emitting false;
Girls with small goals
Can be quite the trip,
The best night ever

Birds chirp,
And the next time I’ll
Be sure;
When they scream,
Keep the windows open,
Light a match too….

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Hmm...?

by JairTollet

Posted Jun 9, 2009

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Your descriptions were clear, but a little short.

I was rather confused throughout the entire thing. Many of the sentences didn't flow together or make sense by each other.

Work on it a little more, and try to make the sentences flow together. (read more)

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Date Added

Jun 8, 2009 at 10:26 AM

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Literature

Genres

Abstract, Other

Topics

People, Pain

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