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Tangerines '09

Educated fruit

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Something I wrote in my head on my way home from school.

Just a little something, really. Graduation is on my mind, maybe? I don't know.
I liked it though.

Tangerines.

An empty tree:
All the fruit is on the sidewalk,
sitting in the rain.

Lynn Oaks Drive Tangerine Tree
Graduating class 2009

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Date Added

Mar 7, 2009 at 4:00 PM

Article Type

Literature

Genres

Haiku, Poetry

Topics

Education, Miscellaneous

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