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Sometimes Poetry is Simple

Sometimes Poetry is Simple

written on a matchbox

 
Black socks
reaching 2
thumbs past
my ankle
(I measured
it)
 
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  • What Can I Say?
    Posted Mar 26, 2009
    +8
    Very simplistic, yet a million different pictures come to mind when I read this. I basically agree with Simey, pretty much.

    Extremely short, much? I memorized this already.

    Not great, but nonetheless minorly compelling. I guess only advice is to expand. (read more)
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  • Date Added
    • Mar 20, 2009 at 12:55 AM
  • Article Type
    • Literature
  • Genres
    • Haiku, Poetry
  • Topics
    • People
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