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Snooze.

Snooze.

Everyone understand this feeling and the urge to snooze.

 
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Set your alarm for 6:30 am and let this peom echo through your mind.
When you wake up in the morning and your mind is still exploring
all the secrets of your dreams way,
you awake and rub your eyes as wretchedly you start to rise
as your are forced to taste the arsehole of the day

Your effot starts to fail and your limbs gently flail
as your melt back down into your bed,
but the alarm again starts ringing a vicious song its singing
as you furiously wrap the pillow around your head.

As you drift the birds start sinigng and the alarm again starts ringing
And you know that from your bed you should leap,
But your mind is still breeming with dreams you can be dreaming
Hit the snooze ,my friend, and go back to sleep.
 
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  • Needs an edit
    Posted Nov 17, 2008
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    I really empaphise with this poem very strongly. I can very easily get fed up with how early my alarm rings and set it for another hour later.
    The rhymes were a good choice (most of the time), and the general message of what you're trying to say comes through (mostly).

    There's... (read more)
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