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Rachael?

Rachael?

again? again.

 
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I spent some time as a beat poet in San Francisco
That girl!
In the San Francisco cafe...
What is it about her?
She's pretty, but
it's more than that.
It's beyond that.
It's a nameless quality.

Ah!
Those cool, brown eyes,
the shape of her face,
her sense of style;
I've seen her before!
in other bodies,
living variations of the same life;
she's the same girl.

Yep!
I recognize her now,
though this is my first time
seeing her.
She looks like a Rachael
and her hair is short this time.
 
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  • I Get It
    Posted Aug 18, 2009
    +6
    I can relate to this immensely;
    "It's a nameless quality."
    You can imagine how many times I've thought of this while looking at a girl, man.
    "She's the same girl."
    That's for sure.

    Dude, you seem sorta stalkerish in this one... Lol n... (read more)
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  • Date Added
    • Jul 22, 2009 at 7:26 PM
  • Article Type
    • Literature
  • Genres
    • Free Verse, Poetry
  • Topics
    • People, Society
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