Miguk

There was some good description and word choices. For the most part it flowed nicely while also maintaining that daydream kind of state we all can get into.

Some word choices I didn't like, but I can understand why they were chosen from the overall read of the story.

Overall its a good story, but nothing to really scream about. Doesn't have that "kick it up a notch" factor, which might equate to the lack of reviews
For me though, I think the main reason this was so hard to score is because I don't even remember the last time I daydreamed. Kind of hard to get into and read a story about something you probably haven't done in a few years. I blame terrorists