King of hearts

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Sweep of well groomed hair
fictitious female hearts race
all those beauty queens
sat not too far away from him
he meant to love them
for a day or two
he’s too fast to give same
give a hand to the queen

there have been girls who cried for him
he grinned in conquest then screwed
the next piece that showed a moments weakness
gave a crap
Is he gonna love when she comes round?
might only see her
as another girl for another night.

• Nice change

  by Simon

  Posted Nov 3, 2008
  +10
  I agree this is a total style change for you and you've pulled it off very well! This was very interesting as in a short poem you almost produced a character 'assasination'. You created a character very quickly and vividly brought him to my mind.
  
  I agree with k8 that there was a re... (read more)

• Crowley
  Nov 4, 2008
  Lol i got that.
• Simon
  Nov 4, 2008
  Ummmm when I said 'your arrogance put me off' - I meant the title 'arrogance'!!! I wasn't insulting you honest!!!

• Date Added
• Nov 2, 2008 at 12:22 AM
• Article Type
• Literature
• Genres
• Poetry
• Topics
• People, Society
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