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Just a Puddle

Just a Puddle

Gas, gas everywhere...

 
 
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  • May 15, 2008
    Oops, at the beginning I forgot to put He was tired. My bad.
  • May 15, 2008
    Chaotic theory, guess what. That paragraph with the periods? That was intended as the guy's shallow breathing when he wakes up from his nightmare.
  • May 15, 2008
    yes but don't you think that you should have only done that when we was talking not describing the scene.
  • Aug 15, 2008
    Shameless bump.
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