Hmm, I didn't know that Jews were ridiculed a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Perhaps there was more meaning behind the Galactic Rebellion than we originally thought?
You have a talent of bringing your personal voice out through the story. When I read it, I don't imagine me reading it. I imagine this different person reading it since you have created a personality.
Put you hate on paper
They won’t know it’s you
All people are the same
Gain major fame
Sign here in blood
And you’ll win the game
It’ll sell well
But a trip to hell
Hell, what’s it matter
Have a bestseller
In your wallet now
Choose wisely
Poverty or riches
Your own bitches
Stop being one
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