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Impressionism in writing

Impressionism in writing

A view on writing nearly aimlessly.

 
 
  • Love Hate Relationship
    Posted May 22, 2008
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    The Pros
    I wanted to give this a thumbs up so bad! But I could not. I like your idea, it was creative and interesting. It was really deep, man. It sounded intelligent and thought provoking. I loved it. I like your style
    The Cons
    Sadly. This aricle was wayyy too short. It looks like a long forum post. It killed this article. Maybe you couldn't think of anything else to say, maybe there was nothing more you wanted to say. Nevertheless, it needed to have more volume.
    Final Thoughts
    Don't change a thing, just make your next article longer. That's it. That's all you got to do. Sorry I had to give this a thumbs down.
    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
 
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