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I was having trouble getting the alignment to work so i put in the dashes to keep the right shape.

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Home

Home, bound by the viridian ties of enlightenment
-------the trench within my breast augments;
--------the bridge’s length becomes opaque
-----------------as night and day collide
-----------------------with change.
---------------------------But lo!
---------------------------I’ll wait
--------------------and change I’ll make
---------------to cross the bridge’s distance;
-------------in time the chasm’s lips will purse
-------and in harmony’s surroundings I’ll be, home

• Justin
  Aug 25, 2008
  I came. I saw. I enjoyed. Try not to rely off of visuals though, it is rare when they actually add to a poem.
• Treborsinna
  Aug 24, 2008
  i know i hate having to use the dashes, but the tabs weren't working for me. Thanks a ton for checking it out. XD
• BlueShizz
  Aug 24, 2008
  It was good, but the dashes sort of threw it off. I think you can use tabs on here if I'm not mistaken.

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• Aug 23, 2008 at 11:02 AM
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