You had a nice start, however, it is far too short and doesn't cover the major elements of a story, which I'm guessing is what you were going for. I suggest adding A LOT more substance (e.g. more than 3 paragraphs) to it and resubmitting.
Put you hate on paper
They won’t know it’s you
All people are the same
Gain major fame
Sign here in blood
And you’ll win the game
It’ll sell well
But a trip to hell
Hell, what’s it matter
Have a bestseller
In your wallet now
Choose wisely
Poverty or riches
Your own bitches
Stop being one
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