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Fox Child

Fox Child

Fox Child, Fox Child

 
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Written for a contest.
Fox Child, Darling,
Should I bite you?
Should I incite you?
Wrong you, and write you?
Would you let me tie you?
Take to your open thigh, Darling,
But defy you,
Deny you.

Oh, Fox Child,

Could I… (Let me)
Dress you in gauze
And shackles?

Would you… (Please do)
Plead to be free,
When we both know
You want otherwise?

Oh, Should we… (Tell me)
Fleshly sin against
Gods of the masses?

Fox Child, Fox Child:

When I say “Jump”
You say, you say:

When I say kneel
You say, you say:

And when I say dance?


You can’t talk with
A gag in your mouth.

Fox Child, Creature,
You’re not so wild in my trap.
I’ll invade your den with my animal;
Succumb to the beast of my beast!
Don’t be too afraid, Creature,
When my bite
Breaks your skin:
A blood lust drives me.

Fox Child, Pet,
When I’m done,
I’ll remove
The metal bands,
I’ll lick away
The dark blood.
You can curl up in my lap,
And I’ll stroke you, Pet,
And finger your wet hole
To calm you.


Submit to me forever, Pet,
For you are my Fox Child.
 
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  • Nice Rythem... at first.
    Posted Apr 3, 2009
    +6
    It's good to see an orignal poet among all the teen aingst stuff you find these days. The simple description brought the (naughty) subject matter to life. I enjoyed this piece. It had a nice rythem even though it went into free verse towards the second part.

    The rythem kind of goes ... (read more)
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  • Apr 29, 2009
    I really like this. Everything that needed to be addressed already has been in the other comments and reviews, but imdeadgoaway has created an edgy poem here that captivates its audience. Pun fucking intended.
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