I was going for a vibe similar to Just a Puddle with this one, but I guess I messed it up. Sorry, I like making good pieces of writing, and I'll try harder next time I go serious.
Yeah, I could sense the "Just A Puddle" style used here, but you got a little too, I guess you could say in-depth, with the persons mind, making it very hard for the reader to follow any form of a story.
Put you hate on paper
They won’t know it’s you
All people are the same
Gain major fame
Sign here in blood
And you’ll win the game
It’ll sell well
But a trip to hell
Hell, what’s it matter
Have a bestseller
In your wallet now
Choose wisely
Poverty or riches
Your own bitches
Stop being one
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