Exploring Myself

Virtually error free, very funny, and very interesting. It quickly went from a solid introduction right into a hilarious story, and concluded sharply but sweetly.

I'd like to have seen it be a bit longer, although other than that, there's nothing bad about this story.

My absolute favourite so far on this site. Great job.

Exceptionally funny. Incredibly well written.

What more is there to say?

I honestly can't think of any really. Only thing I would have done differently would be possibly to expand on the whole abortion thing a little more, as I think you might ahve been able to make something more of it but that's it.

An excellent piece. Keep up the good work.

From the beginning to the very end, this article is plagued with hilarity. You used detailed descriptions when appropriate, which added flavor to the overall humor. You started out with a great introduction, and my interest kept consistent all the way through the article. Your conclusion was very well done, and you did a great job at summarizing the topics discussed in the article.

There really isn't anything I could find that I disliked about this article. If I really wanted to get picky, I'd point out that there were a few places where sentence structure could be improved just slightly (e.g. in the eighth paragraph down, I think it would have flowed better if the comma was replaced by a question mark in the sentence "What are they, easy-access body tissue that doctors can practice their surgical skills on?"). But really, these problems are so minute, that the composition of the rest of the article is good enough that these are barely even noticeable.

In my opinion, this is by far the funniest article on the site to date. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Simply Wonderful! No major grammatical errors to note. Very humorous throughout the entirety, which seems apparently hard to do these days. Also, the thought progression was easy to follow, it wasn't difficult to understand why you went where you did. Also, good usage of bold and italicized wording, it seemed suitable where you did it.

Not many to speak of. I loved the entire thing.

I enjoyed this article more than any other on the site so far. It was an easy read, humorous, and just the perfect length. This is how to correctly rant. Looking forward to more articles such as this in the future.