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A good read
Posted Aug 24, 2008
The Pros
I liked a lot of the figurative language. The dragon part was a good bit, and certain lines stuck out to me. The piece really picked up as it moved on.
The Cons
The beginning was a little off for me. I think more elegant or sophisticated wording would have worked better for your piece.
"Half-assed" kind of makes a piece look trashy, as opposed to other descriptive words you could use to match the rest of the pieces wording and feel.
Final Thoughts
All together, a pretty good write. Great concepts, and a strong feel from it. Keep it up, and all that jazz.
Author's Reply
Thank you for the words. I agree that the beginning may have been a little too staccato and sharp, however it was my aim to jar the reader before slipping into something more comfortable and eloquent. I honestly appreciate the review, thank you very much. I will keep in mind what you have said.
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