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Currents

Currents

Three short poems, an experiment in semi-spontaneous writing.

 
snowfall; silence; slip away

currents, part one


Invisible currents are revealed in specks of white,
Lighting up in the incandescent glow of above me,
First bright but ever fading in the darkness,
Weakened by the freezing winds and swallowed up by shadows.

And just as I reach for that beautiful light,
It shrinks to a dull...
...blue...

...pulse...

Somewhere in the distance,
Like a candle underwater,
Still burning in defiance of all our minds can see.
More powerful than God,
And still unnoticed.

And in time, though I keep reaching,
It gives up and dies.

...but I keep reaching.


happy dreams of misery

currents, part two


Quickening air currents, cold stones in a sea of warmth;
Though faultless, still heartless,
Though fearless, still hopeless…
Playing with careless words that escape and never return,
While I hold my breath waiting for an echo.

Running my fingers along blue veins, beneath pale skin,
While she argues with herself inside herself;
Tears without meaning escape from tired eyes,
Regret returns, rebounds remiss, returns.

Dreams granted bring beside them shame,
Sadness brings relief from pain,
As the currents carry out the burdens
Of too many lonely years.

But it flows in one direction, decisively unstoppable,
From one heart to another and I selfishly accept the trade;
Justification after action, explanation before reaction,
Struggling with words in between.


something from nothing (and back again)

currents, part three


Currents ebb and flow
Across the surface underneath;
Foundations will erode and disappear.

Unified movements,
In perpetual repetition,
Unseen in twilight still,
But heard in echoes through your mind.

Rhythmic swells become a crashing wave
Pressed beneath the weight of heavy air;
Sand castles towered high
Are on the verge of collapse,
Waiting for a final wave to crush them.

Tides rise with every inward flow,
Gradual, unstoppable,
Yet hesitant, perhaps,
Retreating after each advance.

With finally restraints released
The tide comes forth once more,
And as we feel it wash across us,
Castles return to sand.

Just sand.

(And we try not to wonder why we built them.)
 
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  • not terrible
    Posted Jun 29, 2008
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    you've got some parts in there that I liked, by which I mean some of the words you used were appealing (decisively unstoppable...things like that)

    I saw a lot of alliteration in your piece but I didn't see it being used for a specific purpose most of the time. Another thing is is loo... (read more)
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