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Chicken Weather 6-10

Chicken Weather 6-10

cluck cluck, drizzle

 
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More chicken weather...
If you wondering about the first one, it's in a seperate deviation. Realized after posting it, since these are all one-verse poems, that I should just post them in bunches. So, here's some more.
Wine bottles with
twist-off lids,
rain drops tapping
at the windows.
She never understood
what her mother meant
when she said,
"It's chicken weather."
====

It's dark outside,
the clock glows 3:22,
The car radio plays
like background noise,
she dangles a cigarette
out the passenger window.
He's in the convenience store,
angry, because
"it's too damn early
to be buying birth control."
====

She left in her wake
a pile of broken glass and ash
on the wooden floor.
He picks up the largest piece
of the shattered ashtray,
places it on the table,
and lights another.
====

A reflection:
a streetlight in a puddle.
When will I forget her?
====

The eye of the storm
passes over, and
the ceiling is silenced.
She wipes imaginary dust
from the top of her desk,
her last refuge from chaos;
straightens blank papers,
arranges unsharpened pencils.
====
 
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  • The forecast is for"chicken weather"
    Posted Jan 27, 2010
    +12
    These are less introspective tan the previous six and I prefer them for that reason. The elements of each character are expertly defined with a simple yet bizarre action. There is a subtle blend of comedy in these as well whereas the previous set were far heavier in their imagery. I particularly ... (read more)
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  • Date Added
    • Jan 27, 2010 at 6:52 AM
  • Article Type
    • Literature
  • Genres
    • Free Verse, Poetry, Other
  • Topics
    • People, Pain, Miscellaneous
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Newest Addition
March 20, 2010
 
I rather thought she now stood further away from her end of the counter. In her mind I was no doubt shedding ugly on her desk, she had to get further away. Sneaking a peek at my zits (I'm sure she did), she hands me my mail. The word international flashes in the air: I get international mail and your job is to hand it over. Thankyou. Make-up from overseas.

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