Bleeding ink

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My pen bleeds ink
staining purities stink
with vile verse
a greater curse
my vomited rhyme
imitating the sublime
who’s subtle notes
ring in woeful quotes
infernal minds machinations
built of decrepit hearts translations

Her fine white hand to still me
an icy brush of powdery skin.
The beating inferno of the poets heart
frozen, by the blissful touch of apathy
that slays the demon of my disillusion.
My scrabbled lines still shining on the page.
The very twirling of madness, fury, pain
is at last stilled.

No more verbal tapestry
She’s got no love of poetry.

• Ah, magnificent

  by imdeadgoaway

  Posted Aug 29, 2008
  +10
  I wasn't feeling it at first, but when I got through...
  Gods, wonderful.
  Nice wording, nice theme
  
  Love how the real clicking point
  Wasn't until the very end.
  
  The first stanza should be more drawing. It was a bit easy for me to lose attention when r... (read more)

• Jabrol2001
  Aug 19, 2008
  This is a different kind of poetry then i normally like, but this one is good. Good job and keep up the work!
• DCTomas89
  Aug 18, 2008
  Sweet. I've never been a big fan of the emo blah blah stuff but this was really good and captivating. Great job.
• Tacoman
  Aug 18, 2008
  I really enjoyed this. I'm not a big fan of poetry but I really liked this. Kudos!
• blamninja1
  Aug 18, 2008
  I thought it was pretty good. Nice job.

• Date Added
• Aug 18, 2008 at 3:19 PM
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• Literature
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• Poetry
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• Romance
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