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Chapter one.
Sunday, September 7th, 2008- So school start tomorrow, my first day at the high school. Cool I guess. Kind of scared, not sure what to expect, lucky that I have my old senior sister to help me out. Things should go pretty smooth, I hope, good night.
Monday, September 8th, 2008- School seemed to drag on, I though I would of got lost, but I didn’t. Thank goodness. Saw all my old friends, nothing really new. Steph wasn’t that much help, I had to find everything on my own, but its whatever. I got around good. There’s so many kids in my school. And everyone walks so slow, I hate it. Hopefully something interesting will happen tomorrow, night.
Tuesday, September 9th, 2008- I hate it when the teacher makes you get up and say your name, or write like three things on the board explaining stuff about you. Its like, why should I? You want to get to know me, then ask me. Maybe I don’t want the whole class to know everything about me. Its so gay, blah, I hate school. Maybe things will get better, night.
Wednesday, September 10th, 2008- Steph’s birthday is today, whoop, not really excited. Going out to Tai, I guess. I do like there chicken peanut stuff. Nothing else though. Oh this is going to be boring, bye.
Thursday, September 11th, 2008- Its been years since the twin towers, a sad day to remember. Wish it would of never happened, so many lives lost. Life is so unfair, and people are so stupid. Night.
Friday, September 12th, 2008- So I’ve been talking to this Nick guy, he’s 21. I’m only 14, but I told him I was 18. This guy isn’t very good looking, but whatever. I want to hang out with him, and Niki is talking to this Nate dude. Were going to chill with them.
Saturday, September 13th, 2008- Steph, Niki, and me all went to the park. I told Steph about the Nick dude, and she doesn’t care. He tired to kiss me, which I thought was weird. He’s really ugly, but whatever, he can buy beer so its ok.
Thursdays, September 18th, 2008- Sorry I haven’t been able to write, I’ve been busy with Nick, Niki, and Nate. We have been hanging out everyday. And Nick is talking about me sleeping over his place, I really want too. I just don’t want to go alone. So the plan is, is to get Niki and Nate to sleep over too. Hopefully it’ll work. Telling mom me and Niki are sleeping over Amber’s.
Friday, September 19th, 2008- I hate Nick, I really do. Everything was going good, we got some beer, and started drinking. We weren’t allowed to smoke in the house so had to go outside. It was pretty late, Niki and Nate went upstairs, they were doing it. Nick and me slept downstairs, on a pull out couch. He tried having sex with me. And I said no. I wasn’t ready to loose my virginity, not to someone I just met. He kept pushing, and pushing. Finally, I got up, ran out of the house to the ally, and didn’t look back. He came chasing after me, with his car. It was so scary, he almost hit me. He grabbed me and pulled me in his truck, I tried fighting him off, but he was too strong, he raped me. I fought hard, until he pulled out a blade and cut my legs, then I turned over and he cut my neck. Three slices on my neck, and I don’t even know how many on my legs. I’m not a virgin anymore, I’m so disappointed in myself. He carried me back to his house, what was I suppose to do? Wait till he actually killed me? I was bleeding bad, and took a paper towel to my bleeding legs and neck. Then he made me lay down with him, I cried the whole time. Not because of the bleeding, but because I didn’t want to loose my virginity, not to some guy. But to someone I love. Later on. It was morning, and Nick had to go to work, thank god. He woke everyone up at 6, and made us leave his house. Niki noticed something wrong, but I didn’t tell what happened, I was scared. We walked and walked until we found a McDonalds, I was so hungry. By the time we got to the park it was only 7:30. What was I suppose to tell my mom? How was I going to hide it from her? I was scared, and wanted to kill myself.
* More chapters coming*
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A good story line.
I think you need to put more detail into your story and build up to the 'big' bits. Otherwise people will get bored easily.
I think doing a diary type story is quite hard too. Maybe you could try writing a basic story. Then work your way up to a diary ... (
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