Art

I really enjoyed this poem because i understand it first hand. You did a wonderful job portraying the internal battle of an artist with his creation, with his act of creating. I know i've felt this way before so many times...
The language is really strong, and some lines are really striking emphasizing the struggle that is creation. I found this line to be really great , "Tugging and whispering inside our heads,a gentle siren’s call not easily tempted" Instantly i had an image of this whispering, this tugging that takes place in the mind

the ending was a little bit odd, the last few lines just seemed kinda awkwardly written, not really fitting with the flow of the rest of the poem that well, but it's not too distracting.

To me, this was like a burst of wind of truth. I was instantly taken. It's a strong piece, nice flow.

i liked the way this poem will have different meanings to different types of artists, because all art is different and stuff, what is art? that sort of thing. but what it meant to me was the way that sometimes i feel completly uninspired,and find it frustrating to not be able to 'make some art' very cool

still a pro pretty much, but its the kind of poem with so many ways to be interpreted, and will have no fixed meaning. like i said, not really a con...

i lked it

I think most people on this site can relate with poem. Every artist feels exactly like this at one time or another. But the urge never leaves you alone

For why doth art forsake me! didn't fit too well with the rest of the poem because of the archaic wording. but only a tiny bit you could really leave it in

I very much enjoyed reading it. Thank you

I'm not sure what it was but I liked something about this piece... I reread it a few times now and I really can't pinpoint why but it says something to me!! (could I be more vague in my feedback?? Sorry)

The rythm seemed off in places and I'm of the opinion that in this kind of free verse the pace and flow is very important so i think this may have detracted a little.

I enjoyed this, i liked the thought behind it and know I'll come back and read again.