Ale

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Let me have
a beer with lunch.
I’ll forget that
I was miserable before
and in an hour or so,
I’ll be miserable again.
And until that
slight slight buzz
wears away,
time will move just
a little bit faster.
Tomorrow will come sooner,
and though that will be
another discontenting day,
I can have another beer,
another reprieve,
with tomorrow’s lunch.
And the next day,
the next lunch,
the next beer.

Someday soon,
I know,
things will turn around.

“Would you like a drink, sir?”
Just water, thanks

But for now,
allow me a little
ale for my ails.

• Quirky but good.

  by BunnymasterG

  Posted May 8, 2009
  +8
  What stands out for me with this piece is the rhythm and flow. It's put together really well. There wasn't anything complex going on, but it wasn't too simple. It's good. Just not a lot to say about it...
  
  I feel there should be a little more, somewhere, about something. I thought the... (read more)

• Date Added
• May 6, 2009 at 5:29 PM
• Article Type
• Literature
• Genres
• Poetry
• Topics
• People, Miscellaneous
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