A KItten I Once Knew

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Seemed your body, eternally fresh
When taught me you the delights of your flesh.
Were you but a kitten,
Inspiration to so many words written.
Was I but a friendly imagination
Who found in thee a temptation.
But to my discontent, a Kitten strayed.
When wished I she stayed.

Someday again, I’ll see her,
I feel certain of that.
But where I once saw a Kitten
Will I now see a cat?

Will hopingly I pursue,
Looking for a Kitten I once knew?

• Faux Yoda.

  by Crowley

  Posted Oct 15, 2008
  +2
  A good example of well executed rhyming couplets. They don’t seem forced and aren’t any half rhymes which is much better here as they wouldn’t fit at all with the style. I like the consistency in your metaphor. The idea of the kitten and the play between name and metaphor really works. It seems l... (read more)

• Date Added
• Oct 15, 2008 at 10:11 AM
• Article Type
• Literature
• Genres
• Poetry
• Topics
• Romance, People
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